m1kclark's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Origami Hydralisk 2]

NICE!

I think you should color it. Awesome work!

Pohmme-d-adham responds:

Thank you. :)

[RAAAARGHHH]

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KAHN!

[Clone Wars, Kushiban Jedi.]

Looks like Mewtwo

The facial structure reminds me of Mewtwo more than a rabbit, and that tail looks like fire. These are not negatives, just comments.

johngoldenwolf responds:

Thats because he is a Kushiban.
http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Kushiban
;)

[Pin-up: The Artist]

Issues with detail

The piece has some flaws that you notice right away, distracting from the value of the image. The biggest problem is that the tattoos are SO detailed, and uniformly everything else is blurry by comparison. And while I like that you added a shadow, her hips and head should be further away from the wall than her hand and knee, so the shadow should have some perspective. Lastly, there are some anatomical problems: the nose and mouth look disjoint, and her open hand seems too large. The idea is great, a pin-up painting a skull and roses on a wall, but the detail flaws make the image suffer.

[Lili Zanotto]

Don't know Lili

But I can see how improved this is from the October version of "Lili", and for that alone I'm giving you a 10. Then there's the fact that the drawing itself deserves a 10 anyway.

[RadhaKrishnaTemple_TopView]

Nice

Unfortunately, my first thought was "low poly". But that is extremely unfair to you, because the depth-of-field focusing and the lighting and the detail in the shrine-like area (forgive my ignorance) are all fantastic and speak to your vision. With very mild refinements, this could look professional, and you've got the imagination to make it really, really engaging as an image!

[Throbulator]

Friggin awesome

That is some EXCELLENT use of the Figure contest. Truly epic and original!
(You must tag it with "ngfigure2011" though, or it won't be included in the contest.)

Savory responds:

I tagged the map with it, I didn't think the render needed to be tagged. I guess it doesn't hurt tho

[The Void]

Atmospheric!

You mentioned in "Anonymous Anima Machkra" that this was for a video game, and I LOVE IT. I'm imagining starting, FPS style, in the bottom-center area and looking around at the ridiculous and all-white objects floating around me, and there's only one place that I can walk to. That place has a forboding, powerful looking face and a design that seems almost alien compared to everything else, and I would be forced to wonder, "What the hell is about to happen!?" I would love to play a game where this is the type of imagery used!

Now, I know Kinsei01 comes off cocky, but he tends to notice things that I miss, and the improvements he suggests are valuable (even if his wording is infuriating). If you get around to experimenting at all with lighting, you could do some really awesome stuff here. (I don't know Max, so I can't help there.)

VidGameDude responds:

Trust me i take in everything he gives me professionally and calm.
its just when he doesn't realize that you can click the picture and enlarge it is all =/

also this is for Matt's Epic battle fantasy 4 game.
not an fps, but i love the way you described it!
be sure to check out the other one instead of just this.

and thanks for the review!

l8s

[Balamban Contest 2011]

Echo VidGameDude

I think that VidGameDude has it exactly right, and that you are really talented. Good luck on the contest, and I'm looking forward to more of your stuff!

einharjar responds:

Thank you sir, i will continue to practice and post artworks in the future...:)

[Black Queen]

Tron + Protoss

I like the style and the color scheme. The glow effects really add to it. But I admit that the creature strongly reminds me of the Protoss species from Starcraft, and the glowly-monochrome colors with the line-art (above her head and at her hands) are reminiscent of Tron. It's an awesome image and character, though, so no modifications needed.